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Okay. It just screams INCOMPLETE, doesn't it?

For thirty minutes or so I kept staring at the screen, wondering how to fix it. And a dry, sarcastic, unforgiving voice in the back of my head said 'Start over'. And I reeled. I couldn't do it.

...I think this is one of my worst yet. When I planned it I thought I'd have some decent corpses, at least.

I might come back someday to edit it.

...not likely.

First in the jinchuuriki mode series. (F-Asterisks, I wonder, will I ever get to the last?)

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:iconenkdosu:
Strange, I got a completely different vibe of Noboru from the story. Though that's a result from not reading enough of the Manga I suppose.

Do you use line art by any chance? Or simply block it on? The colouring looks like the fill tool was used, that's all - something that I've found in my many crazy experiments is not a good thing to try.

And don't be too hard on yourself now, you have a distinctive style in terms of colouring =).
I'm sure by the last jinchuuriki you'll have something to be proud of.

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Mission Log: Stardate, Year of the Tiger.
:iconamsuhl:
Uh, this is, of course, a younger version. I'm terrible at drawing old people... :-/

Fill tool? Me? Of course not! Never. Ahahaha. Ehem. (cough) Well, yeah. It's an easy way out...
:iconenkdosu:
I do realise that(He's a younger version XD). I just never figured him to have red-hair for some strange reason in my little world ^^. Or that style of clothing. But hey, what the hell do I know?

XD. Well, just a word of advice in the way of critique, try using the paint brush tool, for blending, for everything. It ought to get rid of the noise around the edges.

I actually find the fill tool to be more messy than anything really =P. So yeah, just my thoughts and experiences.

Keep it up though, to finish on a different note.

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Mission Log: Stardate, Year of the Tiger.
:iconamsuhl:
I asked Ayien about the color his hair used to be; she said it was auburn. I went for auburn.. but it does look red, doesn't it... :3

As for the clothing... I was being random.

I'll try that, thanks. After my current WIP is finished.
:iconnin-vam-jedi:
i personally like this one alot. i think you did a fabulious job
:iconjediclaire:
He looks like how I picture him, when I read his story about his experience as a child in the wars. Thank you for bringing this story to life and I hope you can draw more soon.

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